The table below shows the number of temporary migrant workers in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006.

The table below shows the number of temporary migrant workers in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006.
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of migrant
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. in four lands in 2003 and 2006 and the
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of these employees per 1000
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in these regions in 2006.
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, the
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of temporary migrant
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grew in all four countries between 2003 and 2006. The United States had the highest
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of
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New Zealand had the smallest total but the highest
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per 1,000
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in 2006.
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shows clear differences in both total numbers and proportions of migrant
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across the countries. In 2003, the United States had the highest
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of temporary migrant
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, with 577,000, which increased to 678,000 by 2006. Australia followed, with 152,000
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in 2003, growing to 219,000 in 2006.
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, the United Kingdom saw a significant rise, from 137,000
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in 2003 to 266,000 in 2006.
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, New Zealand had the smallest
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of
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, increasing from 65,000 in 2003 to 87,000 in 2006. In terms of
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per 1,000
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in 2006, New Zealand had the highest
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at 21.1, despite having the smallest total
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of
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. Australia ranked
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with 10.7
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per 1,000
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. The United Kingdom had a lower
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of 4.4,
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the United States had the smallest
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, with only 2.3
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per 1,000
people
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Vocabulary: Replace the words workers, number, people, proportion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Temporary migrant workers
  • Labor mobility
  • Statistical data
  • Insights
  • Trends
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Economic growth
  • Demand for labor
  • Immigration policies
  • Disparities
  • Concentration
  • Comparative analysis
  • Consequences
  • Economic impact
  • Cultural integration
  • Social services
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