The chart below shows the changes in three different areas of crime in Manchester City centre from 2003-2012.

The chart below shows the changes in three different areas of crime in Manchester City centre from 2003-2012.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the changes in three different areas of crime in Manchester City centre from 2003-2012.
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The line graph illustrates the differences in three various areas of crime, namely burglary ,
car
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thief
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theft
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and
robbery
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in Manchester city centre between 2003 and 2012.
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, it is clearly seen that
car
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thief
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theft
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had increased over the entire period,
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however
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however,
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burglary had decreased. Except for
robbery
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, which remained more or less the same.
Car
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thief
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theft
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remained
highest
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the highest
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indication ,but
opposite
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the opposite
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for
robbery
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. Burglary
experienced
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increased twice from 2003 to 2004 and from 2008 to 2009,
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since 2004 had sharply declined till 2008, but during
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last
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the last
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4 years stayed stable.
Car
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theft started at roughly 2,000 cases in 2003 and, despite minor fluctuations, remained stable until 2006. After a slight decline, the number of cases steadily increased from 2006 onwards, finishing at around 2,500 in 2012. Meanwhile,
robbery
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was the least frequent crime, with figures hovering between 500 and 1,000 throughout the decade, showing minimal change over time.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words car, robbery with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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