The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Fairmont Island, according to a survey of visitors.
Two pie charts above illustrate the data about Fairmont Island, which was collected by the survey of visitors. The first one shows the most common disadvantages,
while
the second chart oppositely is about its advantages.
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According to
the first pie chart, it is evident that the high cost of living is the main trouble, and the percentage is making up 45, which is almost Linking Words
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, there are two more drawbacks, which are the weather conditions and entertainment, Linking Words
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are accounting
for 20 and 30 respectively. The disadvantage with the less significant effect is Wrong verb form
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food quality, which is equal to 5 Correct article usage
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By the second chart regarding privileges of the island, we can see that the primary reason to visit the place is people, with a percentage equal to 40. Another reason to visit Change the spelling
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Fairmont is the scenery, with a little difference from the first reason, equal to 3 Correct article usage
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two advantages are culture and accommodation, and their statistics Linking Words
are accounting
for 12 and 11 respectively.
In conclusion, Fairmont Island is popular for its culture and inhabitants, Wrong verb form
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