Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. - Say why a driving license is advantageous - Recommend a driving school - Give extra guidance/ tips
Dear Mary,
Hope you are well. It has been a long time since we have seen each other. We should catch up. I’ve heard that you are planning to get your
license
so I am writing you Use synonyms
this
letter to give you tips on driving.
There are a couple of reasons Linking Words
getting
a driving Rephrase
why getting
license
is beneficial. Use synonyms
Firstly
, Linking Words
I
it is convenient to get to your desired place. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Secondly
, public transportation is not reliable. Linking Words
For example
, if you miss a bus, you might need to wait for another hour for the next one. Linking Words
Thirdly
, a Linking Words
license
makes your journey more comfortable on a rainy day.
The driving school Use synonyms
that is
suggested is at VicRoads Burwood. The instructors there are very patient Linking Words
especially
towards first-time drivers. They ensure that new drivers feel confident enough before proceeding to drive on a more difficult road.
Learning to drive is difficult so it is important to practice. You can ask any
Full-licensed friends to be in your car Add the comma(s)
, especially
while
you practise driving around your neighbourhood. The Linking Words
last
advice I can give you is to be Linking Words
relax
as a tense driver often Wrong verb form
relaxed
panic
more on the road. I
Wish you all the best in getting your Correct subject-verb agreement
panics
license
.
Best wishes, JoscelinUse synonyms
Submitted by joscelinching on
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coherence cohesion
Make sure to complete your sentences and thoughts fully, as an incomplete sentence can leave readers hanging and disrupt flow.
task achievement
While the letter covers several advantages of having a driving license, adding more specifics or examples could enhance the argument.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is suitable for a friendly correspondence, making it accessible and warm to read.
coherence cohesion
The letter begins and ends properly, with a clear greeting and closing, maintaining the format of a friendly letter.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.