Your friend recently came to your birthday party and bought you an expensive present. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • thank your friend • explain how useful the present is • arrange to meet up with your friend sometime soon

Dear Raj, I hope you and your family are doing well. I was glad to

met

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you after

long

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a long

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time on my birthday. I am writing

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letter to thank you for your presence and the birthday gift given by you.

Firstly

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, I would like to let you know that I felt

jubilent

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jubilant

after

opened

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your gift as

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I wanted that

zara

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Zara

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handbag since my childhood. I do not have any other purse with me. Apart

form

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from

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that,

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will be very fruitful for me in order to bring all my important documents and water

bottel

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bottles

with me.

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, the size of

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bag is perfect for my

hight

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height

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but not

the

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apply

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least, if you

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not have any plans

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apply

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nexr

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weekend

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we can meet again next week on

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as we both are not working on that day. Please let me know about

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plan. I look forward to your response and thank you so much again for the beautiful present. Yours lovingly, D

DARSHITA

Jan 21, 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Ensure all paragraphs have clear single ideas to improve clarity.

general

Check for minor spelling and grammatical errors to enhance clarity and precision.

coherence and cohesion

The greeting and closing of the letter are appropriately used, creating a friendly tone.

task achievement

The letter successfully thanks the friend, explains the usefulness of the gift, and arranges a meeting.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

168 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

sincerely appreciate
generous gift
means a lot
truly grateful
thoughtfulness
perfect timing
came in handy
can't thank you enough
catch up soon
make plans to meet

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