The diagram below shows how coal is used to produce electricity

The diagram below shows how coal is used to produce electricity
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The diagram illustrates the generation of electricity out of coal.
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, energy is received through a sequence of 6 steps, which include a pulveriser,
furnace
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, cooler and turbine, and generator with a transformer. After that, the electricity eventually goes to
power
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the power
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line.
Initially
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, extracted coal is delivered to a pulveriser on a conveyor. The pulveriser crushes coal into
a
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small pieces that fall straight to a
furnace
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. Inside a
furnace
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, the coal is burning in order to produce warmth. There is a chimney that lets gases out
to
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the atmosphere from the
furnace
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. The rest of the process is held without the usage of coal. The resulting heat goes to a cooler and a spinning turbine
that is
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connected to a generator. Obtained energy is distributed by two lines that are connected
with
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a transformer. From the transformer three voltage lines deliver electricity right to the power lines and the process ends.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words furnace with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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