You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can start. You should You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear.........
Dear Mr. Richard
I am Akbar Surya. I was recently accepted in your
company
and I will start to join your Use synonyms
company
on next Use synonyms
week
. Use synonyms
unfortunatly
, I am not able to join your Correct your spelling
Unfortunately
company
next Use synonyms
week
Use synonyms
due to
several problems.
I apologize because there are medical emergency in my family and owing that I am not able to join your Linking Words
company
next Use synonyms
week
. There is no one in my family who can handle all situations. My father is now old Use synonyms
to
handle all situations.
Rephrase
enough to
Beside
that, my wife is going to give birth to my child next Replace the word
Besides
week
. Moving Use synonyms
further
, my wife Linking Words
need
me a lot to support her Change the verb form
needs
mental
so that he is strong Change the word
mentally
to
face Rephrase
enough to
this
situation Linking Words
as well as
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their
Correct pronoun usage
apply
phisically
.
I hope you understand my Correct your spelling
physically
situations
and I will commence Fix the agreement mistake
situation
to
work on Wednesday of next Change preposition
apply
week
. I Use synonyms
am
very Wrong verb form
would be
thankful
if you allow me because my wife Correct word choice
grateful
need
me and I do not want to lose Change the verb form
needs
this
job.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Akbar SuryaLinking Words
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language
Ensure that each sentence is grammatically correct and clear. Consider revising phrases like "owing that I am not able" and "my wife need me a lot to support her mental so that he is strong" for clarity.
structure
Try to use paragraphing to separate different aspects of the situation more clearly, such as the family emergency and your wife's situation.
task achievement
The letter covers all requested components (explanation of the situation, description of the problem, suggested start date).
tone
Polite and respectful tone is maintained throughout the letter.