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In many societies, there is a growing emphasis on sustainable living and reducing environmental impact. What are the challenges of adopting a sustainable lifestyle? What practical actions can individuals take to contribute to sustainability?

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In the modern technological world, more and more people are trying to reduce their carbon footprints in the environment by adopting sustainable living.
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 there are some major issues that humans need to combat before achieving the net-zero carbon emission goal, there are many steps available that can be taken by individuals to help us achieve it sooner. Both of these are elaborated on in the
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 essay. Several hurdles need to be overcome before human beings are capable of living a sustainable life. The predominant challenge is its upfront
cost
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. Many products that are eco-friendly and are currently available in the market are priced at a higher
cost
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.
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, to get to the break-even point, it takes several years to recover
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 invested resources. The solar panels are the perfect example of
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. Solar panel experts suggest that it takes about eight to ten years to cover the
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 of these panels before using free electricity. But perhaps, people should be
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 looking at other ways which are more practical and can be implemented immediately. The primary action is using more environmentally friendly products that are easy to dispose of and can
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 much longer. By using objects that could be functional for years, the need to buy new ones sooner can be eliminated. A simple example of
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 is plastic bags. Switching to multiple-use bags that are made from recycled material will reduce the disposal of several metric tons of plastic in the environment every year.
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, the mantra “reduce-reuse-recycle” is changing the world for the better.
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 its primary
cost
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 is high, there are some solutions available that can be adopted by individuals to live a sustainable life.

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task achievement
You present a clear response to the task, outlining both challenges and practical actions related to sustainable living, but providing a more extensive examination of the challenges would enhance the depth of your argument.
coherence and cohesion
Your essay has a logical structure and flows well, but varying transition words and phrases could help to strengthen the connections between ideas.
coherence and cohesion
Strong introduction that clearly outlines the essay structure and thematic focus.
task achievement
You effectively use specific examples to illustrate points, particularly with regard to eco-friendly products and renewable energy.
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