The graph below shows the average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Swedon, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts present average

carbon

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dioxide

emissions

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per person in four countries the United Kingdom, Sweden,Italy and Portugal from 1967 until 2007.

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, the United Kingdom and Sweden can decrease their

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emission through the period. Meanwhile, Italy and Portugal continuously increase. Even though

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emissions

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in Italy increased but not exceed the

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emissions

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from the other countries.

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Usage

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of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score. ,

Carbon

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pollution in the United Kingdom decreased steadily from above 10 metric

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to just below 10 metric tonnes.

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, Sweden receded significantly at below 6 metric

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while

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at the beginning are increased from above 8 metric

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to more than 10 metric

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, Italy rose from around 4 metric

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to just below 8 metric

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between 1967 and 1997 and kept below 8 metric

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until 2007.

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, the production of

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emissions

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in Portugal got higher over time at just below 2 metric

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in the beginning to just around 5

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of the period.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words carbon, emissions, tons with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

217 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

CO2 emissions
per capita emissions
renewable energy
environmental policies
industrial growth
efficient energy policies
economic development
sustainable practices
carbon footprint
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