The pie charts below show how general household costs were broken down in a certain city in both 2017 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate how much people spent on general
household
expenses in a particular town in the years 2017 and 2018.
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Overall
, it is evident that the amount of spending on entertainment and food increased in 2018; Linking Words
whereas
, people spent less on accommodation and schooling. Linking Words
However
, spending on rent or house purchasing was the largest expense in both years. Notably, Linking Words
household
bills' costs remained steady.
Spending on rent or house purchasing was the biggest expense in 2017, which was 32%; Use synonyms
however
, Linking Words
this
declined slightly to 25% in 2018. Despite Linking Words
this
decline, spending on accommodation was still the largest Linking Words
household
cost in 2018. Schooling ranked as the second biggest Use synonyms
household
expenditure at 22% and decreased marginally to 18% in 2018.
Meanwhile, people spent more on entertainment and groceries, increasing from 10% to 15% and 18% to 24%, respectively. Use synonyms
Therefore
, spending on groceries became the second largest expenditure in 2018. Eventually, Linking Words
household
bills had the same percentage in both years, which was 18%.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words household with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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