Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some individuals think that a promotion can reach the intention of consumers to buy their

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others

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claim that we do not need any promotions, since we are seldom really aware of it.

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essay will elaborate the both views. I believe that we tend to buy things

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the quality of products offered

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the marketing strategies. Offering

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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

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for example
for instance
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to give a clear example
such as
namely
to illustrate
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

6.5

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

5.5

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

6.5

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

5.5

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

253 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

persuade
promote
attract
influence
impact
consumerism
commercialism
market
product
brand
endorsement
manipulative
saturated
overwhelmed
repetitive
distracting
irrelevant
exaggerated
misleading
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Othe people think that in today's world subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both points and give your opinion

when we meet someone for the firt time , we generally decide very quickly what kind of person we think they are and if we like them or not. is this a good thing or a bad thing?

In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Although many people value public parks, this space could be better used for the other purposes such as residential areas for the ever growing population or to develop business and build economics. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.