Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes. Discuss both these views and give your opinion:

There is considerable controversy about whether paying
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is a sufficient contribution to
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,
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some individuals are advocates of
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idea, others believe that
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are more responsible for their countries. On the one hand, some
people
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argue that paying
taxes
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is a big enough contribution. To support their idea, they claim that most problems we have in our
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stem from the lack of enough infrastructure. So, the
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can invest in the development of necessary infrastructure through tax collection.
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, under-resourced schools can be equipped, if the
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have enough financial resources.
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, they
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claim that tax payment provides enough money to support poor
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.
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, the
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can pay these groups directly or subsidise their main costs,
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as transportation costs.
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, some individuals believe that paying
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is an insufficient contribution to
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. They believe that all problems cannot be solved only by limited financial resources which the
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has.
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,
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should help the
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by spending their time and money voluntarily.
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, in Indonesia,
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have constructed more than 100 schools only in 2 years,
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the
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needed more than 10 years to construct
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number of schools. In conclusion, some
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believe that paying
taxes
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is enough to contribute to
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and they claim that, the
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can invest in necessary facilities and help weak groups of
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with these
taxes
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.
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, I think some social issues are too big and the
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cannot solve them only by its limited resources. So
people
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are responsible for helping the
government
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with volunteer activities.

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task achievement
Expand on the examples provided to make them more compelling and connect back to the main point more clearly.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure that all sentences clearly connect to the overall argument and that paragraphs transition smoothly.
coherence and cohesion
The structure is clear, with distinct paragraphs that address both sides of the argument, and a succinct conclusion.
task achievement
The use of relevant examples, such as the situation in Indonesia, effectively supports the argument presented.

Your opinion

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Contribution to society
  • Public services
  • Community involvement
  • Democratic participation
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Local economy
  • Cultural understanding
  • Voting rights
  • Volunteer work
  • Responsible citizenship
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