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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram depicts the changes
of
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in
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 the floor plan of Central Library from 20
year
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years
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 ago.
Overall
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,
This
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 library
have
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 increased their sectors from 7 sectors to 9 sectors, and quantities of rooms have remained at 4. Starting from the front, the reading
room
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, which
located
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is located
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 on the left and used to contain newspapers and magazines, is turned into
computer
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the computer
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room
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. The enquiry desk, which located
at
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on
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 the right. It used to operate general
service
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such
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 as tickets and book returns,
is
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but has been
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 replaced by a cafe.
At
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 the middle-sharing area,
Adult
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the Adult
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 fiction book
zone
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, where located
at
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 the middle left,
are
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is
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 replaced by all reference books and moved to the middle right near the information desk, which
adjacent
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is adjacent
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 to the self-service machines. The table and chairs, which used to be a public reading
zone
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, were removed,
resulted
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resulting
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as
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 a clear
middle-space
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middle space
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. CDs, Videos, and computer games
room
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, which
located
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is located
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 at the
furtest
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furthest
farthest
 left corner, are expanded and replaced by children's
friction
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fiction
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 books.
Moreover
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,
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a story
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story telling
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storytelling
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zone
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 and two sofas were added.
Children's
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The children's
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 books
zone
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 at the top right corner
were
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was
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tranformed
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transformed
 into
lecture
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a lecture
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room
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.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words room, zone with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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