The maps show the changes on plan of dock between 1980 and today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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the maps compare dock plans in 1980 and today.

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, There have been significant changes in the given period,

transformating

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transformation

transforming

dock

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the dock

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into an area for tourism. The warehouses have been converted into an education centre, an area for kids and apartments, across from which new buildings appeared, including a hotel, parking and sailing club. For pedestrians, the bridge was erected, connecting to sides together.

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, down to the east, river walk developed along the buildings.

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, the number of ships dramatically declined and there is one ship museum left. As for the north, not only warehouses have been reconstructed into the educational centre and zone for kids to play, but

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sailing

club

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been built between them. There are several changes related to the river, too. The new bridge and flood barrier appeared on the east side,

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all 4 ships have been replaced with a

single ship

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museum. Focusing on the south side of the map, it is seen that the warehouse located there reconstructed into apartments, which is surrounded by a hotel on the left and parking on the opposite side, in front of which river walk has been paved.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

193 words

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