You would like to reduce your working hours in order to study part time. Write a letter to your boss. In your letter • explain why you want to reduce your working hours • say which hours you would like to work • describe how your part-time studies would benefit your employer

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Dear boss, I am writing to inquire about a reduction in my working hours for six months starting from next month ,which

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able to join the part-time

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for a management internship at the University of Milan just near to my home.

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, as I have mentioned in one of our meetings before,

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studying for

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will take a few months,

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requires real dedication and commitment in order to succeed in it, So sensibly I may not fulfil all my responsibilities in your company which I am currently working as the senior accountant. When it comes to my timing , I would appreciate it if you shift my working hours from 2 to 8 pm , to 4 to 8 pm. I believe

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timing would not harm the office discipline.

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decreasing my working hours and asking Michele,the accountant of the morning shift before me, to cover the shift until 4 pm would benefit everyone. From another point of view,

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will absolutely affect my future role in your corporation which would secure a more professional service that I hopefully deliver to our customers. Looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely, Narges

nargesamin0Mon Jan 27 2025

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Coherence and Cohesion

Consider organizing your points more clearly, possibly with separate paragraphs for each main idea.

Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure there is a logical progression of ideas for better clarity.

Task Response

The letter has a clear and respectful tone appropriate for a professional setting.

Coherence and Cohesion

Good use of a formal closing and greeting strengthens the professionalism of the letter.

Task Response

The rationale for reducing work hours and the potential benefits are well communicated.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

203 words

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Some people believe that the internet has positive effect , others think that It has negative trends .Discuss both views and give your opinion .

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