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The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in five countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in five countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The polyline illustrates the number of international tourist arrivals in millions in five countries namely,
Brazil
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,
Egypt
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, Malaysia,France and the
USA
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 over a period of 4 years from 1995 to 2010.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 there were dramatic changes. It is clearly seen that the
USA
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 recorded the highest proportion over a 4-year period
Whereas
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,
Brazil
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 and
Egypt
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 remained at the lowest number of tourists.
To begin
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 with, at the first of the year
USA
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 there was a sharp increase followed rise the France of 70,30 respectively.After that,
although
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 from 2000 till 2005 they marked an increase of approximately 90,60 respectively. For the rest of the time the
USA
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 decreased marginally to reach just above 80.
while
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 France went up till the end of the year and followed the same level as the
USA
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 .
Further
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 analyzing the graph, there was a steady increase over the period in two the rest of the countries known as
Brazil
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 and
Egypt
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. They noted the figures did not change in the first two years,
however
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, a recovery was noticed till the end of two times from 10 to reach the fifth of international tourists in
Brazil
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 and
Egypt
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words brazil, egypt, usa with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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