The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how its looks now. Summarize key information and make comparisons where relavant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how its looks now. Summarize key information and make comparisons where relavant.
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The given two maps display the floor design of a public library 20
years
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back and at present.
Overall
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, the library has changed a lot over the period of time and some new facilities are added. The entrance
remain
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remains
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in the same place
of
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as
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the library . 20
years
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ago, in the southwest
corner
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of the
libary
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library
, there was a reading room with newspapers and magazines, and they have been replaced with a computer room. 20
years
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back, on the west side of the map, there were adult fiction books and those have been replaced by
references book
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reference books
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.
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, 20
years
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back, in the northwest
corner
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of the map, there were CDs, computer games and videos available,
however
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, at present, there is an arrangement of
story telling
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storytelling
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events, children's
fictions
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fiction
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and sofas. The entrance remains at the same place in the south at present like 20
years
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back. At present, in the northeast
corner
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of the map, children's books have been replaced by a lecture room.
Furthermore
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, on the east side, there were some adult fiction books, and at present, some self-service facilities and
information
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an information
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desk have been added
with
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apply
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them
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apply
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. In the southeast
corner
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, the enquiry desk has been replaced by a cafe.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, corner with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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