1.Some people think that lawbreakers should be sent to prison. However, others think that better talents among those should be made to work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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crimes should be transferred to

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some said that they should be moved to industrial sectors

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essay will discuss both opinions on how we should treat them in our society for their better future. Generally, criminals will be sent to

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commonly people know today, so they feel remorseful

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their inappropriate actions. Through their

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in

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prison, they will be disciplined with several punishments,

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the implementation of the law and the charges they faced.

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some of these are hurtful and terrifying to most of us, we cannot ignore that they are effective for the individuals to

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repent themselves.

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, some detention

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established communal works during their sentences,

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juveniles are allowed to do beneficial activities

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as cooking, gardening, and others. Their participation and contribution

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not only bring meaningful effects to themselves

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but

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will be tremendously helpful after their sentence

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prisons

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are necessary for sending convicts, integrating them into

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is fair and reasonable, particularly

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who are

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in certain areas. We cannot deny that their bad impression as former criminals to

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society

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unlikely ignored, making them less trusted and hard to blend

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the community.

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, they may struggle

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jobs,

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remaining

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unemployed for a significant period of time, which results in severe financial

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and deteriorating personal growth and development.

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prisons

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are well known as

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place

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of convicts

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to ensure the safety of

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, their rights to have a job should not be ignored

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and the government should play crucial roles,

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issue for the better future of criminals’ lives.