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The pie chart below show the rebenue from 5 industries in Togo in 2000 and projections for 2050. SUmmarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart below show the rebenue from 5 industries in Togo in 2000 and projections for 2050. SUmmarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The revenue of five different industries located in Togo were noted in these pie charts. The varied timestamps indicate when the data were logged,
while
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 the digits inside the chart depict the sum in billions of dollars.
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, the income increased by $99
billion
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 over the course of five decades.
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However
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 not every industry experienced
a
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leverage in their sales.
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, the information services' funds
was
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 decreased by $15
billion
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, starting with $25
billion
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 and ending
in
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 $10
billion
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.
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, the semiconductor industry recorded
a
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significant growth in its statistics, with $15
billion
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 in 2000 and $126
billion
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 in 2050, occupying the largest portion in the illustration.
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, there is
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 source that
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 moved upward in its achievement but not as vast. The real estate development added $5
billion
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 to their account, from $20
billion
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 in the earlier period to $25
billion
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 later.
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 put the category in the second position among the industries in terms of stream of money. On the other side, the soft beverages industry was stable in logs, scoring $25
billion
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 in both periods. The same thing cannot be seen in the life
insurcance
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insurance
 sector,
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 lost a total of $2 million, beginning at $12
billion
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 and finalizing at $10
billion
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Vocabulary: Replace the words billion with synonyms.
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