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Band 6.5

You have just spent a weekend at a friend's house. When you returned home, you discovered that you had left a coat there. There are some important belongings in the pockets. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain that you have left the coat there say what the coat looks like, where you think you left it and what was in the pockets make some suggestions about how to get all of your belongings back You should You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Pat,

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Dear Pat, How are you, I hope you're doing fine. I would like to tell you a big thank you for having me at your place
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 weekend. it was one of the most memorable weekends of my life. Anyway, I'm writing
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 because I left my winter jacket at your place. when I reached home the very next day I came to know that my coat was missing. I don't remember exactly where I kept it but I'm sure that it's in your home. it's a black winter jacket with multiple pockets on the front side and a logo of "Nike" printed near the left shoulder.
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 the coat is not important to me, it has my wallet
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contains driving license, bank cards and a few $100 bills. As long as I can remember I left it on the couch in the dining area of your house
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 we were playing video games on
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. I know that you're busy
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 week, but if you can take
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some time to deliver it to me via the local courier service or bring it to me
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 weekend when you're visiting Peter's house
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 Convey my regards to your parents and I will be waiting for your response. Lots of love, Badar.

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coherence and cohesion
Consider adding a more structured opening, such as expressing what you enjoyed most about the visit. This can strengthen the letter's overall engagement.
coherence and cohesion
Make sure to capitalize the first letter of sentences and proper nouns to improve professionalism in your writing.
task response
The letter has a warm tone and effectively expresses gratitude, which contributes positively to the writing style.
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