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You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter * introduce yourself * ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes * explain why you need to break the contract.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you of my decision to leave my flat earlier than
contract
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 termination because of my new condition. I am Ostore Hassani who rented
this
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 number 23 flat in the Sun building in November of
this
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 year. We have signed a
contract
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 with your company for exactly one year. I must move to another city for a new job opportunity, so I would ask you to break the
contract
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 earlier. I know it is an irregular demand but I need to relocate to a new location. I applied for
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 job
last
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 year and it was an unpredictable happening for me, I was almost disappointed about it,
however
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, all things suddenly changed and now I should prepare myself to have a new house and all these unforeseen circumstances made me an early exit.
Due to
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 my explanation, I will rent another flat as soon as possible and it will be impossible for me without the deposit money that I gave to your company,
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 we should break the
contract
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 for my repayment. It will be your huge consideration that help me to tackle my problem. I hope that my request does not cause you any inconvenience
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 I would welcome to help find a new tenant
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 of myself. Yours faithfully, Ostoreh Hassani.

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task achievement
Make sure to clearly state your request to terminate the contract in the first paragraph for better clarity.
coherence and cohesion
Consider breaking down long sentences into shorter ones to improve readability and coherence.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure that your closing sentence clearly indicates your willingness to assist with finding a new tenant as a gesture of goodwill.
task achievement
You provide a clear reason for needing to break the contract, which is essential for the request.
task achievement
The letter maintains a polite and formal tone throughout, which is appropriate for the context.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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