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average

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the average

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amount of carbon dioxide emissions per person in

United

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the United

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Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal over a period of

fourty

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forty

four

years between 1967-2007.

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this

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fourty-year

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forty-year

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period,

United

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Kingdom's average emissions remained the biggest, with all three other countries

produced

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much less.

Trend

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line of Sweden changed chaotically

while

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other lines changed steadily. In 1967 Portugal produced

least

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amount of CO2 approximately 1.3 metric

tonnes

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per person. Over a period

this

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indicator saw a sharp increase to 5.4 metric

tonnes

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. Just like Portugal carbon dioxide emissions of Italy

rised

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raised

rose

risen

from 4 metric

tonnes

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to 7.8 metric

tonnes

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Noticeable

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decrease was in

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Sweden from 8.7 metric

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to 5.4 metric

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which

exactly

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levels with

Portugals

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emission proportions.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

123 words

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The map below describes the changes to the park in 1980 and now

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Some people think that sports involving violence, such as boxing and martial arts, should be banned from TV as well as from international sporting competitions. To what extent do you agree?

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In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why do people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?

Some people feel that the government should regulate the level of the violence in films on television and at the cinema. Others feel that violent films should not be regulated. Dicuss both view