It is now convinient for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. Do you agree or disagree with this development?

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These days,scientists and tourists can

trave

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travel

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to far natural

environments

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comfortable

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than 50 years ago. I agree with

this

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due to

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technology

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and

humans'

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inventions. It has several

reason

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for

being agree

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with

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first,people invent some

machine

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and gadgets

that's make

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commute

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the commute

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easier.In the past individuals had to spend a lot of time

for

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commuting.but nowadays

traveling

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convinient

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convenient

,like they can go anywhere

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airplanes

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or their own car.

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However

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it is a little tough for some remote natural

environments

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Secind

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reason could be

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technology

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google

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Google

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map,the

internet

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,social media,

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etc.

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for

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example

tourist

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tourists

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can search

about

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place

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that they want

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and

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get

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all ways of going there.

then

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they can choose

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easier

way

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sometime

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cheapest

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way

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, many individuals believe that

technology

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and inventions are not effective.They

are not agree

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with using

technology

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and

wants

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to use

old

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way

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to go to remote natural

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,like using paper

map

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maps

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ride

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a bicycle, and challenging

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way

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for

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example they prefer to travel

with

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bicycle and see some catchy nature not seeing them on screen and phone.they might prefer to use paper map which is not smooth. In conclusion, I totally agree with

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situation and in my perspective now it is more comfortable for everybody to travel around the world and see different places even remote natural

environments

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specially

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for world

travelers

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travellers

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and

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it is a huge step forward from

the

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coherence

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content

You have clearly outlined your opinion on the topic, stating that you agree with the development.

structure

Your essay has a recognizable structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

235 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

advanced technology
transportation
remote natural environments
ecosystems
environmental degradation
wildlife habitats
conservation
ecological footprint
biodiversity
sustainable practices
ethical debates

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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