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The graph shows the number of tourists visiting the Galapagos Islands between 2015 and 2022. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the number of tourists visiting the Galapagos Islands between 2015 and 2022. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided
line
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 graph illustrates the
quantity
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number
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 of tourists who visited the Galapagos Islands from 2015 to 2022. The graph displays three lines, representing
visitors
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 staying on cruise ships (blue
line
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),
visitors
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 staying on the island (green
line
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), and the total
number
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 of
visitors
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 (grey
line
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). The horizontal axis represents the years from 2015 to 2022,
while
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 the vertical axis indicates the
number
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 of
visitors
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 in millions, ranging from 0 to 4. In 2015, the
number
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 of
visitors
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 staying on cruise ships was approximately 0.3
million
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, as indicated by the blue
line
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. In 2019, the
number
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 rose to around 1
million
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, and
this
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 growth continued until 2022, reaching a peak of approximately 2
million
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visitors
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. The green
line
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 represents the
number
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 of
visitors
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 staying on the island. In 2015,
this
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 figure was 0.8
million
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, demonstrating a consistent increase until 2018 when it reached 1.5
million
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visitors
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. The total
number
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 of
visitors
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 steadily increased from 2015 until 2018 when it reached around 2.1
million
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visitors
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. From 2019 to 2020, the
number
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 remained stable at 2.5
million
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visitors
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. In 2021, there was a slight decrease to 2.4
million
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visitors
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, followed by an increase in 2022 to 4
million
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visitors
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words line, visitors, number, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "indicates" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "represents" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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