You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter give details of your course explain why you need a week off say what you want the Principal to do.

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Dear sir, I am an international student

persuing

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Human

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Resource Business Management course

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your University.My tutor is

johnson

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, and I am

full-time

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student in

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course. I am writing

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letter to request you for one week off during

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course next month. Actually,my cousin has invited me to his wedding, and I am very close to him. I have been waiting for

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wedding

from

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many years. My friends would provide me

notes

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with notes

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of missing lectures and assignments.

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would be grateful

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apply

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apply

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if you give permission to me to be absent from 25th

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to 30th

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If you are kind enough you will give permission to me .

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faithfully Aman

amansandhu2227Wed Feb 05 2025

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Consider adding a brief introduction about yourself, including your student ID or year of study, to provide context for your request.

coherence and cohesion

Make sure to use a clear paragraph structure: one for your course details, one for your request, and one for a polite closing.

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Review phrases for politeness, such as 'I would greatly appreciate it if you could grant my request.'

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The letter clearly states the reason for the week off request, which is important for understanding your situation.

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You expressed your close relationship with your cousin, which adds a personal touch to your request.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

116 words

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You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter give details of your course explain why you need a week off say what you want the Principal to do.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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