Should long-term job seekers in receipt of government benefits be made to do voluntary work so that they give something back to the community? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Long-term

job

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seekers

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who are employed by the government

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receive

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extensive

benefits

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should be made to

complusory

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compulsory

compulsorily

do voluntary service to the

community

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.

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reason for

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,

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is that the

benefits

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which they receive are mainly deducted from the income of the

community

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through various taxes . The high taxes which the

citizen

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citizens

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pay , they should be not satisfied with the public services and

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this

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gives a chance for

job

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seekers

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to understand the issues faced by the people which will positively make them understand the concerns of the people through their perspective ,

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the

job

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seekers

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will get

first hand

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understanding of how the

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they

intent

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to do will be , and how they can tackle the issues

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provides them

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hands-on experience to handle them I would like to highlight one of my personal

experience

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experiences

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when I was

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student , i had the option of

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my local

community

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on the

benefits

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of using renewable power sources , i was the one of

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students

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who enrolled for the same , and

i

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was able to visit the

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and explain the advantages of

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power sources how it will benefit long term . During the

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was not only able to give all

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the information

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i

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knew

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but

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understand how the

community

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saw

on

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it , some of them that

concerns

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of

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about

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how it

will be

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work , so

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helped me to understand their

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viewpoints

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view point

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and

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i

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was able to satisfy them that there are schemes done by the Government for the taxes that they pay Considering the above and my personal experience ,

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will fully support the notion of

long term

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job

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seekers

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to do

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voluntary services for the

benefits

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they receive