The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your area isn’t working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
a.Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly
b.Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbors
c.Suggest what should be done about the problem
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Task Achievement
Try to add more details about how the broken garbage container is affecting the community, such as the smell or increased pests, to enhance your response to part (b).
Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure that there is a clear paragraph structure, with each paragraph dedicated to a single idea for better clarity. Try to separate the description of the problem, its effects, and your suggestions into distinct paragraphs.
Coherence and Cohesion
Make sure to include a polite closing statement and your name at the end to complete your letter properly.
Task Achievement
You have clearly identified the issue of the garbage collection not working properly, which is a good starting point for your letter.
Task Achievement
The tone of your letter is polite and suitable for addressing a local council, which is essential in formal correspondence.
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