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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map gives information about the floor plan of a public
library
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 20 years ago and exhibits recent changes there.
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, after the years, the
library
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 has established services regarding new technologies,
such
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 as a
room
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 for computers and self-service machines. From the outset, two decades ago, a public
library
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 had tables and chairs in the middle of the hall, with adult non-fiction
books
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 on the east
side
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 and adult fiction
books
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 on the west
side
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. On the west-north corner was the
room
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 for CDs, videos, and computer games on the opposite
side
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 was a
room
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 for reading, consisting mostly of newspapers and magazines. On the
north-east
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northeast
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 corner was the
room
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 for children's
books
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, and on the opposite
side
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 was a
room
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 for the enquiry desk. Nowadays, the central
library
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 changed the
room
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 for children's
books
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 to a
room
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 for lectures, and where the enquiry desk stood, there is now a cafe. The reading
room
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 was changed to a
room
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 for computers, and the
room
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 with CDs, etc., was changed to a
room
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 for
storytellings
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storytelling
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.
In addition
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, the storytelling
room
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 was widened and has new facilities. The tables and chairs that were in the middle of the
library
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 are now gone. The placement for adult fiction
books
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 was replaced with
books
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 of all references. On the east
side
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, between the lecture
room
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 and the cafe, were established the new self-service machines.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, room, books, side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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