When we meet someone for the first time, we generally decide very quickly what kind of person we think they are and if we like them or not. Is this a good thing or a bad thing?

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Facing strangers and judging them is a common experience for all.

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people

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see

someone

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as a first appearance they sometimes evaluate their

personality

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and decide whether they are good or bad which certainly makes either a positive or negative impression on them. From my point of view, It is my strong opinion that

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is not a good approach either. In

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essay, I will explain my points supporting my thought. Too early judgment can mislead

someone

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very easily.

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people

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's appearance may not be perfect always. As an example, the scholars do not worry about their high-class appearance or gestures.

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, if we evaluate humans very quickly without listening to them or spending some time with them, we may discover a scholar to be an unwanted person.

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, early validation can lead to unfair biases. If

someone

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comes near to us and tries to ask for any address without proper introduction, we may think him to be a fraud and may call the police.

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, it might be possible that the person is truly helpless and needs our ethical support.

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kind of early judgement sometimes may save us from unwanted situations, but it is not enough reason to support the matter of judging

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early. Early evolution may sometimes show weak

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evidence

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Such

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as, when

someone

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identify

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a stranger as a bad soul and expresses directly to him, he may think of him as a rude

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and

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may get hurt.

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kind of thing is never expected from any responsible human being.

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kinds of attitude make

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very conservative which they can not hide in any other places , especially in public gatherings

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in social programs. These are not treated as acceptable behaviour in a civilized society. In conclusion, though there are few supportable points to being judgmental about

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too early, it is more practical and positive to take proper time evaluating a stranger considering the risk of misleading, avoiding wrong biasing and increasing own

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why I am supporting the point against being judgmental about an unknown person too early.

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coherence and cohesion

Make sure to maintain a clear and logical flow of ideas throughout your essay. Each paragraph should connect smoothly to the next, enhancing the overall coherence.

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Improve your introduction and conclusion by summarizing key points and restating the thesis clearly. This helps reinforce your argument and provides closure.

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Provide more relevant examples to support your points more effectively. Specific and concrete examples can strengthen your arguments and make your essay more persuasive.

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Your introduction clearly presents your opinion on the topic, which sets the stage for your essay effectively.

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You've made valid points regarding the potential drawbacks of early judgment, showing critical thinking.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

359 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

first impression
initial judgment
stereotypes
assess
non-verbal cues
body language
appearance
facade
misjudgments
unfair judgments
decision-making process
social situation
character
repeated interactions
open-mindedness

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Your opinion

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