the graph below shows how people buy music

the graph presents information about the percentage of total music

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by three methods,

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as :

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,

downloads

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, and

CDs

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purchased. The most major trend is the increase in stream

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from 2011 to 2018 compared to the other two

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methods. In detail, in 2011, the highest

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method was

CDs

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which was approximately 55% compared to

streams

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and

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which were 5% and 33% respectively.By 2014,

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CDs

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purchases went down dramatically to 36% ,

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both

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and

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increased considerably to 14% for

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and 43% for

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In 2018,

CDs

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and

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nearly to the same percentage 28%-35%. In opposite, stream

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on the top with around 40%

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,

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of

streams

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the lowest purchased method in the first period

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it became the highest

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and reached over 40%

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other methods were less than

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percentage.