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The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The line chart illustrates the proportion of the population in
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Philippines
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the Philippines
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,
Malaysia
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,
Thailand
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, and
Indonesia
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 who lived in
cities
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 from 1970 to 2020, with additional forecasts from 2030 to 2040.
Overall
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, the
percentage
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 of the citizens in all observed countries generally rose.
Indonesia
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 and
Malaysia
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 experienced a significant increase throughout the period, compared to
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Philippines
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the Philippines
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 and
Thailand
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.
Indonesia
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 and
Malaysia
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 were two countries that witnessed a gradual increase in the
percentage
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 of citizens who lived in
cities
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 from 1970 to 2020 from around 13% to about 51% and nearly 30% to approximately 74% (the highest of all observed countries in 2020), respectively.
In contrast
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, the
percentage
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 of
Philippines
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 citizens who lived in
cities
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 experienced a decline from around 50% in 1990 to just above 42% in 2010.
Additionally
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, the
percentage
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 of
cities
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 population in
Indonesia
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 surpassed
Thailand
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 in 2000 at just above 28% and continued to surpass the
Philippines
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 in 2010 at around 42%. The
percentage
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 of city people in each country is expected to continue growing from 2020 until reaching its peak in 2040 at just above 80% for
Malaysia
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, around 60% for
Indonesia
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, approximately 50% for
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Philippines
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the Philippines
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, and just below 47% for
Thailand
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words philippines, malaysia, thailand, indonesia, cities, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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