The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart illustrates the proportion of dance class locations in a town in Australia,

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the bar chart displays the number of age groups attending different types of dance

classes

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at

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in

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the same town.

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, the most preferable location

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for

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dance

classes

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in the town for individuals is private studios. Children under eleven tended to choose ballet

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,

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above 11 years old people choice different styles.

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, young people prefer to attend private studio locations at 48%. Community halls and school halls came to

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second place with probably the same percentage at 18% and 24%, respectively.

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the lowest percentage of young people

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college-based studios at only 10%.

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, the number of children

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ballet

classes

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is the highest with 600 students

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only 300 students for children from 11 to 16. For modern

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, most of

students

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the students

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from 11 to 16 registered with around 530

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children

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and 200

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children

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under 11. Tap

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has

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probably the same number of different age groups 400 for 11-16 years old, and 450 for under eleven years old.