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The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day

The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day
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The maps
illustrates
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illustrate
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devepolmets
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developments
 in a university campus from 2010 and now.
Overall
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, it is readily apparent that the settlement has gradually transformed from a small rural campus into a
predominatly
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predominantly
predominately
accommodation
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 over the years.
To begin
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 with, In 2010, student
accommodation
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is
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was
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 located to the southwest and south of the
lake
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. Over
the
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time the number of students soared,
road
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the road
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 for cars was built to accommodate the rising figure of students. To the north of the
lake
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,
teaching
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the teaching
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 block was replaced by
arts
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an arts
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 building today and to the northwest of
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lake
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the lake
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had
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was
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 transformed science building.
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, shops and restaurant is situated to
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the nourtheast
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nourtheast
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northeast
 and east of the
lake
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 and
had
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have
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 been removed in favour
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of stuudent
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stuudent
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student
accommodation
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. Student
accommodation
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 is site
to
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south of the
lake
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,
while
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 at present it transformed
to
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into
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 student facilities.
In contrast
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, the lawn and outside seating area which were close to the
lake
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 have been removed. The
lake
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 remained the same and is still the central point of the campus.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words accommodation, lake with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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