The table below shows the number of motor vehicles per 1,000 inhabitants in eight countries in 1990 and 2000.

The table below shows the number of motor vehicles per 1,000 inhabitants in eight countries in 1990 and 2000.
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The table gives information about the number of
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vehicles transported transports per 1000 population in eight different countries in the years 1990 and 2000.
Overall
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, it is clear from the table that, Brazil and Romania had significantly higher populations than other provinces.
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the lowest data is shown in Cambodia. In the year 1990,
Luxembourg
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and New Zealand, the population of used
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vehicles accounted for 548 and 531 per 1000 inhabitants, respectively.
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, the Bahamas had approximately 235
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vehicles per 1000.
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, in Romania, Jordan, Chile, and Brazil, the way of purposing
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automobile
demonstrates fluctuated between 50 and 68.
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the lowest rate figure is shown in Cambodia at just over 1
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vehicle per 1000. In 2000, the highest rates were in Brazil and Romania, with 13580 and 8012 per 1000, respectively.
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, New Zealand and Luxembourg had slightly changed figures than the previous year, around 557 and 728. Average figures were in Jordan, Chile, and
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the Bahamas
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, with 157, 88, and 187 per 1000.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words motor with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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