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Band 2.5

You live in a block of flats,your neighbour makes a lot of noise which has has caused problems for you Explain the situation Tell him how you are affected by this Suggest what you want the landord to do

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Dear I'm Kendall Jenner your tenant flat B011 of apartment Broadway.I'm writing
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 letter to bring to your attention the noise caused by the resident in B004.They have purchased the flat B004,
is
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 a drunkard who beats his wife ,and she yells like hell at about 12 oʻclock during the night. I would
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 like to know that my father has chronic heart trouble.
Due to
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 the screams,he wakes up alarmed and sometimes does not sleep through the night. It's very detrimental.I've notified the apartment association about
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,but I'm waiting in vain for an action. Since he owns the house, he does not pay attention to the
comlaints
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complaints
 caused by tenants.So,I want you to pitch in and solve the problem.Else,I will have to move to another flat. I would appreciate your
invervention
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intervention
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 regard. Yours Sincerely Kendall Jenner

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Include a more formal greeting and closing to enhance the professionalism of the letter.
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Clarify the relationship between the incidents and the impact they have on your life. This will strengthen your argument.
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Organize your points more clearly; separate each issue into distinct paragraphs to improve logical flow.
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Consider using more varied sentence structures and vocabulary for better engagement.
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The letter addresses the landlord directly, establishing communication.
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The impact of the noise on your father’s health is a strong point, providing a personal touch to the letter.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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