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The table gives us information about the number of people working as researchers in technology per million people in five countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table gives us information about the number of people working as researchers in technology per million people in five countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table provides data on the number of technological
researchers
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 per million residents in five countries—
Poland
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,
Mexico
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, Moldova, Turkey, and Togo—over a four-year period from 2003 to 2007.
Overall
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,
Poland
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 and
Mexico
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 had the highest numbers of
researchers
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, though their trends moved in opposite directions.
Poland
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 experienced a steady decline,
whereas
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Mexico
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 saw an increase before dropping slightly
at the end
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. Meanwhile, Turkey showed consistent growth, Moldova fluctuated, and Togo remained the least developed in terms of research personnel.
Poland
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 started with the highest number of
researchers
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 at 285 per million people in 2003, but
this
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 figure steadily declined to 226 by 2007.
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,
Mexico
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 began at 147 and saw a sharp rise to 242 in 2005, briefly overtaking
Poland
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, before falling back below 200. Turkey demonstrated continuous progress, with its researcher count more than doubling from 47 in 2003 to 106 in 2007. Moldova,
on the other hand
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,
initially
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 declined from 103 to 89 before recovering to 114 in the final year. Togo remained largely unchanged, with only slight fluctuations, recording the lowest figures throughout the period at around 17 to 23
researchers
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 per million people.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words researchers, mexico, poland with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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