Your English-speaking friend has asked for your help with a college project helshe is doing about celebrating New Year in different countries. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say how important New Year is to people in your country describe how New Year is celebrated in your country • explain what you like about New Year celebrations in your country

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Dear Muskan Hope

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letter finds you in good health and prosperity I'm writing

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letter to share my opinions on the New

Year

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celebrations in India.

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, I would like to tell you that the new

year

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is not only an occasion to celebrate for

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in India. Mostly,

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here believe that

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a new

year

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gives them a fresh start and whatever they do on the very first day of the

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i.e. 1st January will become their daily routine throughout the

year

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News

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year

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is celebrated in several ways depending on age,

communities

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community

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, beliefs and

interest

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interests

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. Some

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like to party till midnight and worship God in the morning and

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concentrate on their work and studies.

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others prefer to take a break and explore some hill stations or beautiful beach parties. You know what I like the most about

new

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New Year

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year

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celebrations in India is the social get-togethers, meeting your family, friends and acquaintances serving food and clothes to

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below the poverty line especially. I hope you got the information you were looking for. Please let me know if you want to gather more data on

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topic for your college project. All the best! Babit

babit.batra1992Sun Feb 16 2025

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Try to elaborate more on specific traditions or customs related to New Year celebrations in India to enhance the depth of your response.

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You described the significance of New Year well, emphasizing the fresh start concept, which is very relatable.

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Your personal touch in sharing what you like about the celebrations adds a lovely and engaging element to your letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

202 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Reflection
Goal setting
Traditions
Customs
Public celebrations
Fireworks displays
Unique local traditions
Communal
Familial
Prosperity
Festive atmosphere
Resolution
Good wishes
Exchanging gifts
Cultural and social differences

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