The chart below gives the distribution of worldwide car sharing schemes (%) in 2008 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary.

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The bar chart illustrates the car-sharing habits in different

countries

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in 2008 and 2016.

Overall

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, there was an increased pattern of those habits in those continents, except in

Europe

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. In 2008 in

Europe

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, car-sharing was nearly 60% of usage.

However

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, it went down by just above 30% in 2016. Meanwhile, other

countries

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like North

America

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, South

America

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, Australia, and Asia have shown a raised usage pattern between 2008 and 2016. In those three

countries

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, the percentage in 2016 rose by almost half of 2008. Among those five

countries

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, North

America

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and

Europe

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demonstrated the highest car-sharing, both in 2008 and 2016. In 2008, North

America

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used car-sharing by 30%, and

Europe

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almost 60% of use. In the meantime, the sharing of car usage in South

America

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, Australia, and Asia remains under 10%. The difference in pattern can be because of the changes in policy and the economic standard in those

countries

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Distribution
Global car sharing schemes
Changes over time
Geographical regions
Percentage share
Popularity and availability
Trends and policy impacts
Emerging markets
Diversification
Even distribution

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