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The chart below shows the number of Internet users in three different countries and the world average between 1998 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of Internet users in three different countries and the world average between 1998 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the
number
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 of internet
usser
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users
user
 in three different countries and the
world
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 average between 1998 and 2013.
Overall
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, the graph shows that in 1998 most
of
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apply
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the
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apply
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people in the
world
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 were not able to connect
into
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to
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 the web.
Moreover
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, in
comparation
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comparison
 to the other nation,
Greace
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Greece
 was the one with the lowest
number
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 of users. Denmark and Canada had almost the same numbers, 20.000 and 25.000.
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, in 2003 each sample shows an
increse
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increase
on
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in
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 the
number
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 of respondents: Canada's internet users grew to 70.0000,
Denmark
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Denmark's
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 to almost 80.000, Grease to 21.000 and the
world
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 average to 15.000.
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, in 2008 every sample
continue
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continued
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 growing
on
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in
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 the
number
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 of respondents
nand
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and
 in 2013 Canada had reached the
number
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 of 85.000 people who had internt connection, Denmark more than 90.000,
Greace
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Greece
 60.000 and the
world
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 average
30.000
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of 30.000
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. After taking all the details, we can conclude that in the three countries and the
world
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 average the
number
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 of internet users
have
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has
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 increased over the years.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, world with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Internet penetration
  • Trend
  • Growth rate
  • Increase/decrease
  • Comparative analysis
  • Significant
  • Average
  • Fluctuation
  • Plateau
  • Surge
  • Spike
  • Decline
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