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The chart below shows three different crimes and the number of cases committed between 1970 and 2005 in England and Wales. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows three different crimes and the number of cases committed between 1970 and 2005 in England and Wales. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The aforementioned chart gives information on three different crimes and the
number
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 of cases committed between the
years
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 1970 and 2005 in England and Wales.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the
number
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 of car
thefs
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thefts
theft
 showed a significant increase and remained the highest in all
years
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.
Whereas
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 street robbery stayed at the bottom and showed little to no rise. Getting back to the details, from the year 1970 to 1990, car theft had a small increase from 0.40
million
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 to 1
million
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 but
then
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 skyrocketed to 1.60
million
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 in 1995 before decreasing to 1
million
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 in 2005.
Moreover
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, house burglary showed constant growth from 0.20
million
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 in 1970 to 0.60
million
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 in 1980 and stayed at 0.60
million
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 for 5
years
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. Ten
years
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 later,
this
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number
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 increased to 0.70
million
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 before dropping to 0.50
million
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 in 2005.
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, street robbery barely had any cases reported from 1970 to 1990, standing at almost 0
million
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.
However
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,
this
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number
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 increased to roughly 0.20
million
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 in 2005.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, years, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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