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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Nhi

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Nhi
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The presented table represents the proportion of individuals' expenditure
in
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for
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 a variety of
purpose
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purposes
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 in 2002 from 5 different nations. In the big picture, it is conspicuous that the most significant number of food sold was
Turkey
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in Turkey
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.
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,
this
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 country
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was
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had
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 the highest spending
in
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on
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 Leisure.
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addition
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addition,
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 all nations had the most considerable budget to spend
meals
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on meals
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 and refreshments in
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 observed period Turning to Tobacco, the money allocated for purchasing
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 item was the most considerable spending in Turkey at 28.91%.
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 number was followed by Ireland at just over a quarter,
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, the data reported that the remained countries contributed far below 20%.
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,
Clothing
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the Clothing
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 industry was the second priority for all nations at far below 10%. Italy sold almost 10%
clothing
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of clothing
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 and footwear.
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 proportion placed at the first place,
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 followed by Ireland, Spain, and Turkey at around 6%, and leaving Sweden at just below 6%.
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, the rest category was the lowest percentage in 2022 from 1.98% to 4.35%.

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Vocabulary: The word "considerable" was used 2 times.
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