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The charts below show the amount of financial aid that four countries received and how the money was spent in 1974 and 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the amount of financial aid that four countries received and how the money was spent in 1974 and 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided table illustrates the
amount
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 of monetary
support
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 to China , Indonesia, Thailand and South Africa in millions,
while
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 the line graph indicates these aids distribution among Nutrition, healthcare and finance in the years 1974 and 2014.
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,
although
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 the
amount
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 of financial aid to those nations experienced a downward trend, the distribution of financial
support
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 to the three sectors saw an upward trend. Of these countries, South Africa was the leader in receiving the highest
amount
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 of monetary
support
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 with 65
million
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 in 1974 and 42
million
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 in 2014. Yet by far, the most significant change to take place during
this
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 period was the decline in financial aid to China from 62
million
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 to just 6
million
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 after 40 years. Receiving 55
million
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 and 48
million
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 in 1974, Indonesia and Thailand encountered a moderate decrease to 30 and 18
million
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 in 2014. With regard to the
support
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 distribution, the money spent on catering soared from the lowest
amount
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 of 17
million
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 in 1974 to 70
million
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 in 2014. Meanwhile, a moderate increase of 20 and 5
million
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 were applied to medicine and finance, respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, support, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moderate" was used 2 times.
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