Nowadays, the world is suffering from climate change, some countries
face
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are facing
noticable
Correct your spelling
noticeable
raise
in their temperature Correct your spelling
rise
while
others are dealing with the wild fire which Linking Words
lead
to Change the verb form
leads
a
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apply
sever
habitat Correct your spelling
severe
lose
, Replace the word
loss
however
, there are still some people Linking Words
think
that governments should not waste their money on trying to protect these animals. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with Correct pronoun usage
who think
this
claim.
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Firstly
, securing a balanced ecosystem can regulate our world climate. Linking Words
In other words
, Linking Words
politicains
should agree on rules that help the environment by building an animal sanctuary which should increase the productivity of Correct your spelling
politicians
the
living things and may limit the number of endangered species, Correct article usage
apply
as well as
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regulating
the temperature changes. Wrong verb form
regulate
For instance
, the panda is Linking Words
clasified
as an endangered animal Correct your spelling
classified
by
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apply
which
the Chinese government Correct word choice
and
construct
panda reserves in order to protect them from extinction; Wrong verb form
constructed
as a result
, it showed an increase of more than 50% in less than a century.
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Secondly
, having a large zoo with a diverse amount of animals that can move freely and plants, can attract many tourists and naturalist magazines, Linking Words
such
as National Geographic, to challenge photographers on the best captured picture. Linking Words
Therefore
, governments can get a huge financial Linking Words
benifit
from it. Correct your spelling
benefit
benefits
For example
, in some African countries, there are many nature preserves that Linking Words
offers
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offer
a
guided toures and resorts inside the reserve by which they manage to receive a great amount of income to develop their animal security.
In conclusion, in order to face the ecological problems, I Correct article usage
apply
belive
that living things must be under Correct your spelling
believe
protiction
and there should be rules that enhance it.Correct your spelling
protection
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