The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times. Umar 2

The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times. Umar 2
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The two maps illustrate information about the city of Nelson which has revolutions in recent times.
Overall
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, the city was developed dramatically,and the corner part of the town was
also
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completely modernized. Only the university remained unchanged over the given period. In the metropolis, exactly in the north and east way before 2000, trees were situated.
However
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, the citizens of Nelson cut down trees , and
instead
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of
them
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residents decided to build a new shopping mall. Next to them, the university stayed the same throughout the years. A new train station, which used to be in the western part in 2000, was demolished and relocated near to the centre with tramlines nearby.
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, the bike rental scheme was set up in the centre of Nelson city. Inhabitants removed the old market and replaced it with a modern store. The road was converted into a pedestrian path. The south side of the zone in 2000 was situated
by
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no
facility
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facilities
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,
bars
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and bars
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and clubs were launched for leisure activities.
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, the modern hall of residents was built later.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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