A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food.

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Dear Brian, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am thrilled to have received your invitation to visit you in
Japan
. I am very excited about the opportunity to explore your beautiful country and experience
the
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unique culture and traditions. Before I embark on
this
journey, I would appreciate your advice on a suitable gift for your family. I want to make sure I bring something thoughtful and meaningful. Could you please suggest something that would be appreciated by your family members? I am
also
curious about the activities and clothing in
Japan
. What are some popular activities or attractions that I should not miss during my visit?
Additionally
, I would like to know if there are any specific clothing items or cultural norms I should be aware of to ensure that I am respectful and appropriately dressed during my stay.
Lastly
, I am eager to learn more about the food in
Japan
. What are some must-try dishes or local
specialties
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that I should sample
while
I am there? I am open to trying new and adventurous foods, so any recommendations you have would be greatly appreciated. I am looking forward to my visit and am grateful for your guidance and assistance in preparing for
this
trip. Thank you in advance for your help, and I cannot wait to experience all that
Japan
has to offer. Warm regards, Arthur
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task achievement
Try to include even more specific details about the activities and attractions you're interested in to make your letter more engaging.
coherence cohesion
Make sure each paragraph supports and flows into the next to maintain strong coherence.
layout
You've clearly structured your letter with an appropriate greeting, body, and closing.
task achievement
Your letter comprehensively addresses all points in the task, providing a complete response.
suitable writing tone
You have used a suitable and friendly tone, making it pleasant for your friend to read.
coherence cohesion
Your paragraphs are well-organized with single, clear ideas.
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