The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981,1991 and 2001.

The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981,1991 and 2001.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981,1991 and 2001.
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The pie charts illustrate the variations in yearly expenditure in one
school
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in the UK across three separate
years
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. The biggest cost for the
school
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in all three
years
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was paying teachers’ wages. The other significant
trends
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were
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that the amount spent on insuring the
school
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went up steadily,
while
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the money spent on other workers’ salaries gradually went down. In 1981, the
school
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spent 40% of its budget on paying teachers, and
this
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went up to half of the total annual budget in 1991 before falling slightly to 45% 10
years
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later. Wages for people other than teachers accounted for around a quarter of total outgoings in 1981 and 1991, but
this
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decreased significantly to just 15% in 2001. Insurance costs made up a tiny proportion of yearly outgoings in the first 20
years
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, but
this
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rose to nearly one-tenth of the total budget in 2001. Resources fluctuated between 9% and 20% over the three
years
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,
while
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costs for furniture and equipment varied more widely, between 5% and 23%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words school, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • budget allocation
  • educational expenditure
  • financial management
  • infrastructure investment
  • evolution of costs
  • annual spending
  • strategic funding
  • capital outlay
  • operational costs
  • resource allocation
  • fiscal trends
  • cost analysis
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