The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the number of
participants
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engaged in five different activities at a social centre in Melbourne, Australia between 2000 and 2020. At the beginning of 2000, the film club had the highest participation, with around 65 people,
while
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musical performances had the lowest, starting from zero. Over the two decades, the film club maintained its dominant position, experiencing only minor fluctuations and ending above 60
participants
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in 2020.
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, amateur dramatics showed a steady decline, dropping from about 30
participants
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in 2000 to almost none by 2020.
In contrast
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, table tennis saw a dramatic rise, particularly after 2010, surpassing other activities and reaching nearly 50
participants
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by the end of the period.
Meanwhile
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martial arts exhibited minor fluctuations, peaking in 2010 before a small decline.
Overall
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,
while
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some activities like film club remained stable, others,
such
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as amateur dramatics, declined, and table tennis experienced the most significant growth.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words participants with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • participation rates
  • trends
  • significant increases/decreases
  • stable numbers
  • fluctuations
  • overall participation
  • comparison
  • activities
  • social centre
  • Melbourne
  • participants
  • highlight
  • report
  • graph illustrates/demonstrates
  • 20-year period
  • key features
  • main features
  • statistical data
  • variations
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