The pie chart and the table show the types of living accommodation occupied by 25-year-olds in London during the 1990s and 2010s, and the availability of different types of accommocation in London during the same two periods.

The pie chart and the table show the types of living accommodation occupied by 25-year-olds in London during the 1990s and 2010s, and the availability of different types of accommocation in London during the same two periods.
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The pie charts and the table display the categories of living accommodation signed by
25-year-old
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25-year-olds
in
London
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througout
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throughout
the 1990s and the 2010s and the availability of distinct types of accommodation in
London
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during the same two periods.
Firstly
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, the survey about the lowest type of living accommodation in
London
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that
occupied
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was occupied
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by
25 year old
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25-year-old
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in 1990 and 2010 have a similar category where House (alone)
as
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was
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their choice with around 10 and 5
percent
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per cent
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, respectively. The most popular of that figure in 1990 was living with parents about 30
percent
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per cent
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,
while
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Flat with sharing option became the most favourite in 2010 with approximately 40
percent
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per cent
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.
On the other hand
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, the lowest available housing in
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london
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London
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in 1990 and 2010 have
same
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the same
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category
on
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for
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1-2 bedroom flats with 32000 and 10000, respectively. Meanwhile, the
higest
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highest
data of that figure has
also
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undergone by the same classification on 2-4 bedroom houses where in 1990 with 47000 and 2010 with 48500.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words london with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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