A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday, describe some possible disadvantages, say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer.

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Dear Tim, I hope
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doing well. I was really excited to hear that
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thinking about going on a camping holiday for the first time
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summer! I think
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going to love it—it’s a fantastic way to escape the city, unwind, and connect with nature. Waking up to fresh air and the sounds of birds, spending evenings by the campfire, and stargazing without any city lights are experiences that I’m sure you’ll find unforgettable.
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, there are a few things you should keep in mind before heading out. Camping does come with some challenges, especially if
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not used to it.
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, you might find it a bit uncomfortable to sleep in a tent, and the lack of proper washroom facilities can be inconvenient. Plus, unpredictable weather can sometimes turn things a bit tricky. With some preparation, though—like bringing a comfy sleeping bag and checking the weather forecast—you can easily manage these issues. As for me, I would absolutely love to join you! It’s been ages since we hung out properly, and camping together sounds like a lot of fun. We could plan some hikes, cook meals over a campfire, and maybe even try fishing if
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up for it. Let me know what dates you have in mind, and I’ll make sure to keep my schedule clear. Looking forward to hearing from you soon! Take care, Krushang

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Task Achievement
You have addressed the prompt well, providing reasons why your friend would enjoy camping and mentioning possible disadvantages. Perhaps you could add a specific example of a camping experience to enhance your points.
Coherence and Cohesion
Your letter flows nicely overall, but you could improve coherence by adding transition phrases between some ideas. For instance, when moving from the benefits to the disadvantages, a phrase like 'On the other hand' could help the reader follow your thoughts more smoothly.
Coherence and Cohesion
Your greeting and closing are warm and personable, setting a friendly tone throughout the letter.
Task Achievement
The details you’ve included about camping experiences create an engaging picture for your friend and enhance the task response.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • adventure
  • serenity
  • outdoors
  • refreshing
  • hustle and bustle
  • inherent
  • foster
  • distractions
  • cost-effective
  • unpredictable
  • wildlife
  • adequate preparation
  • physical demands
  • researching
  • campsite
  • lasting memories
  • mutual interests
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