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Writing Samples
Band 5

Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear...,

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Dear Khalid، I hope you are doing well.
Im
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I'm
 writing to you with
regards
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the
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driving
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my driving
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 licence and
i
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I
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 would like to give you some advice. As you know, earning a driving licence can have many great
impact
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impacts
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in
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on
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 your life, and
i
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I
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 will give you some examples
for
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 that.
To begin
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with
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with,
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 learning how to drive will
makes
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 you
mintally
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mentally
stabled
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, the reason behind
this
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 statement is you no longer would rely on
somone
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someone
 to get you to your job and so on.
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addition
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addition,
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 you will feel
more free
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freer
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 to
do
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make
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 visits around the country and explore a lot of things. Now, since I own one,
i
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I
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 should recommend
you
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to you
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 the school
i
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I
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 got it from, it
called
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is called
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 Dallah, a very big and
profissional
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professional
 school near
of
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apply
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my house, I can send you the location later.
However
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, before you go to the school make sure to open
youtube
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YouTube
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 and learn about the fundamentals of driving, it really helps, plus you will have a background about it. Best regards, HDB

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Task Achievement
Try to develop your ideas a bit more and provide clearer examples to support your points.
Coherence and Cohesion
Make sure to check your grammar and spelling for a smoother reading experience.
Coherence and Cohesion
Organize your letter with clearer paragraphs to enhance the flow of ideas.
Suitable Writing Tone
You maintained a friendly and engaging tone throughout the letter, which is appropriate for a personal letter.
Complete Response
You provided practical tips which would be helpful to your friend.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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